Sorry if I been over this before, catching up with this after a few years.
Many good things with this map, like correct treatment of canals.
What is the date of the colour control key? (Madagascar should probably be VF)
Anyhow, noticed the following:
The Italian symbol should be the fasces; I’d also replace the incorrect LH symbols for Germany & USSR.
Papua is spelled Papau! (Is this contagious?)
Bangladesh is anachronistic, this should be East Bengal; in fact India is a mess with Bombay and Calcutta misplaced. Delhi should be the capital.
Norway should not have a border with USSR.
Caucasus is misnamed; the Georgia territory should be Caucasus.
Congo should be Ubangi-Shari.
I’d change SZ 17 to stop a quick hop from England to West Germany.
Where is Portugal, and why is Mozambique British but not Angola?
Afghanistan is wrong; Kashmir should not border Uzbekistan.
I dislike using “Algeria” for southern Algeria, and Northern for Northern; same with French Indochina, France, Libya, Poland, Manchuria, Iran etc.
It seems a bit unfair that Germany gets no railways, as it’s territory covers the most concentrated area of tracks in the World; I’d certainly run a line from Western France to Poland, perhaps all the way to Moscow; and one from Berlin to Rome.
I’d build up the “Sverdlovsk” territory to 3 or 4 IPCs, this was a new heavily industrialised area that produced the majority of Soviet tanks in WWII - this is where the 4th Russian factory should be located/moved depending on rules.